good animation and good humor
i flipped out, this was a very good animation
normally stuff like this doesn't scare me but you placed everything so well it actually scared me
i didn't like the animation too much but that was funny
Thank you. Anything I can improve on in my animation? This is my first animation going from 12 fps to 24, so maybe it was to fast?
nothing really new or interesting the thing is, this doesn't really separate itself from anything else on the site or for the internet for that matter, however, i'd try and improve your comedy style and your pacing, the only thing of comedic value was a stick figure pissing and that wasn't funny, and for pacing it moved too fast and i couldn't even tell what was watching, its ok to have a completely random animation but its needs some type of pacing, the only other thing i can thing of is try something original aside from stick figures. i look forward to seeing you improve your craft in future works
this animation wasn't too bad, but its just ok. just a few little animation things i would wanna see weren't there.
like for the beginning the pencil just scribbled and the balloon just appeared, it would have been fine if the balloon looked slightly sketched in as to not go so far as the pencil actually drawing it (which i would have also liked to see)
this other is just a little nitpick but when the balloon was rising up the string wasn't moving in the back and forth motion that a regular balloon would have.
that's really all that there is to talk about with the animation you did well those are just some things i'd like to see you advance yourself with, good luck i hope to see more animations from you soon.
I thank you! Thanks for advices!
lip syncing is a really difficult task in animation, however, you did pretty well with this, you pushed yourself with the song and there were a few messy frames but other than those nitpicks you did well.
a more professional reboot of Alvin's original work, while a few things were changed they're made up for with the much superior animation of the original.
its a Reboot of a classic, an amazing one at that, i would also say if you enjoyed watching this take a look at Alvin's original work, not only to see what happens but to see how far He has come in his skill as an animator to do this
Fluid animation and a good sense of humor
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